Here's a quirky and cool little poem based on the 'say what you see' technique. Who would have thought numbers to be so interesting??
I especially love the descriptions of number 2 - 'a question seated' and number 7, 'a step detached from its stair.' Of course! That's exactly what they conjure up!
This was one of the first poems I studied in a poetry module at university - to show that poetry can be exciting and original and take anything for subject-matter. Here is a poem that proves the great improvising space of the imagination, the mathematics of precise description and the endless possibilities of originality.
Read it and marvel at the ingenuity.
Cardinal Ideograms - May Swenson
0 A mouth. Can blow or breathe,
be a funnel, or Hello.
1 A grass blade or a cut.
2 A question seated. And a proud
bird's neck.
3 Shallow mitten for two-fingered hand.
4 Three-cornered hut
on one stilt. Sometimes built
so the roof gapes.
5 A policeman. Polite.
Wearing visored cap.
6 O unrolling,
tape of ambiguous length
on which is written the mystery
of everything curly.
7 A step,
detached from its stair.
8 The universe in diagram:
A cosmic hourglass.
(Note enigmatic shape,
absence of any value of origin,
how end overlaps beginning.)
Unknotted like a shoelace
and whipped back and forth,
can serve as a model of time.
9 Lorgnette for the right eye.
In England or if you are Alice
the stem is on the left.
10 A grass blade or a cut
companioned by a mouth.
Open? Open. Shut? Shut.
Wow :-)
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